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Mechanical Rainbow by YokoKinawa Mechanical Rainbow by YokoKinawa
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Título Alternativo: "Rainbow Blast"

Bueno, he visto algunas pics de ponys en estilo Steampunk... así ke yo también trato de hacer mi pekeña contribución =P jejeje.....
He akí la intrépida y única Rainbow Dash en mi versión :D ....
Originalmente una pony terrestre, contruyó "sus alas" y al probarlas, también logró el legendario "Sonic Steamboom" es por eso ke cambié su cutie mark, por engranes con un arcoiris ^^ jeje...
Espero les haya gustado ;)...

Disco Dancin by Mixermike622

Ok, thanks for the people who were nice comment here...
But, I don't allow them here anymore... listen:

I really don't like the offensive and stupid people on my gallery, that's why I disabled the comments, and I don't know why this pic is so controversial..... I'm a MLP and a steampunk fan... I know that the second one has specefic rules, and I really try to do something good, if you realize, this isn't my first steampunk attempt.... I allowed critiques, and thanks so much for the only one who gave me it, but I saw a lot kind of people who is so stupid for only says that my work is a shit, AND don't give me a good critique to make me notice me my mistakes and how I can do a good steampunk work... (curiosly they don't have any steampunk work at their gallery...)
I thins that I have colors mistakes >.>u ... at the wings and the metal... should be copper and no gold XD ....
Oh well, I'll do many stempunk works... the machines aren't easy for me, but I'll do my best :)

Second (and better) version ---> Rainbow Machine by YokoKinawa <---
Simply Amazing!
The fact that you kept all original concepts of the-one-and-only-Rainbow Dash all while adding the mechanical attributes of 'Steam Punk'.
Now, A few remarks:
I see you replaced Dash's wing with a mechanical one... I just hope you kept her original wings inside there! Nothing can really replace her super-wing-flapers! :)
Her cutiemark... WIN! if you added a little bit of rust on the lightning-bolt, it would be top-notch!
Goggles.. well its the trademak recepie for awesomness!
Shading is superb, Color is perefect, subtle earring and- wait.. did you add that heart in her pupil on purpose? looks like i found who was your favorite character! ;)
I'ts probably just my mind playing tricks- but is Rainbow Dash's mane (hair) longer? It would look good if it was! :typerhappy:

Lo siento que la 'critique' es en ingles perro mi espanol no es estupendo... :/
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December 25, 2011
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